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英検一次試験が近づいてきましたね！皆さんなら準備万端で実力を発揮されると思います。体調を整えて当日を迎えてくださいね😘
私の去年書いた作文です。段々ワンパターンになってくるのですが💦型をおさえて、理論立てて書く。基本的なミスを避ける。それに加えて一級辺りになると「こんな言い回し、単語も使えますよ」と示さなければなりません。私は試験当日は守りに出過ぎてあまり点数は取れませんでした。それでも合格ラインには乗ったので、恐れるに足らず。大丈夫です（笑）
過去問題集に載っている模範解答ももちろん読み込んでくださいね！！
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Topic: Should art and music be eliminated from school curriculum?
I believe that art and music should remain in school curriculum for the following reasons.
Firstly, art and music enrich our life greatly. I’d really appreciate them being taught in schools to make sure all of us can attain the basics. They may not give direct effects or benefits to our daily life or jobs, however, they enable us to be more creative and live a more colourful life.
Furthermore, without those subjects, our school life would be very boring and tasteless. I enjoyed those classes in schools in between the main subjects like math and science. We felt refreshed having art and music in between such subjects which need concentration.
Finally, it will often be the case of many households that it is difficult to help their children with art and music at home. Many parents are so busy with their day time work, housekeeping and taking care of children with their basic needs. Feeding them, providing them with clothes and paying the bills. Some parents may not be interested in art and music or have no idea how they can assist their children with them.
In conclusion, I am convinced that art and music should stay in school curriculum. （211 words)